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Bleep Bleep Bleep
I promise not to frown
Bleep Bleep Bleep
Even as the clock runs down
Bleep Bleep Bleep
Paper has replaced my skin
Bleep Bleep Bleep
This war I cannot win
Bleep Bleep Bleep
Promise not to cry
Bleep Bleep Bleep
Because I shall never die
Bleep Bleep Bleep
As long as I’m part of your heart
Bleep Bleep Bleep
Not even death will tear us apart
Bleep Bleep _________________________
©2009-2010 *ashygirl
:iconashygirl:

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It be a poem.... sort of.... I had no idea what category to put this under D: I don't know all the different kinds of poems.... Inspired by this sad video that I was crying about while writing this lol I'm turning into such a sap! oh well, I'm proud of this :D even though it's so depressing (just like most of the things I write...)

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:iconmcrchick142:
wow. this poem is good. i can actually feel the emotion!

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I like to think of Jesus in one of those tuxedo t-shirts that says, "I wanna be formal, but I'm here to party."
:iconkdm13:
yeah, there's a lot of types of poems, not all of them are even chategories on DA

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